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Deviousness `anmari has been spreading her infectious positivity throughout our community for over 6 years. Throughout this time Ana has been at the core of all things devious, passionately developing an eclectic gallery, helping organise devmeets, participating in chat events and also recently completed dedicating her time as a Community Volunteer. We are absolutely delighted to bestow the Deviousness Award for May 2013 to `anmari, congratulations! Read More
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However, to improve, I'd probably add a little more shading around the eyes and nose as well as probably studying eyes just a little bit because (from my personal experience) I found it helps. Another factor, is the eyes, there is a lot more to them than you've shown, HOWEVER, the iris's,pupils and eye highlights are looking good!!
Another thing you may want to consider is the placement of eyebrows...Obviously this depends on whether you had a picture reference, though if you didn't, I'd say than the brow bone needs to be lightened a bit more. And if you didn't have a picture I'd shape the eye brows just a bit more.
The best way to practice getting the different parts of the face the right tone is just to practice with a picture reference and just use the airbrush on GIMP. That's how my recent pictures have been done, but their just doodles really
overall though its really good seeing as you're just trying out with GIMP (out of curiosity which version is it? I use 2.6!) Much better than what I started off with!! And is a very nice piece of art!!
(also, can I just say that the above crit. Depend on whether you were aiming for realism or not, but either way its a great piece of art, and I have to say that if this is one of your first attempts with GIMP then you've done extremely well!!)
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